COLD
Cold
the sense of never knowing
how another sees; though each human eye
can fold about the stars, project
a kind of homespun order on the void,
and though our features flow
in other veins, still
remains the chill sense
that, even skin to skin, a space divides us wider
than the sky; is this shade of blue
your shade of green, my world
your world? Each child alone in darkness,
father, daughter, son
conjoined by love while every sight and scent
is formed by memories of what alone is ours,
cold
frightening
Pignant, Pedro. I felt the shivers up my spine. I'm glad you will give recording these a try. I would love to hear them in your voice...as you intended. I can only imagine, but I love their atmosphere and the stillness they evoke. Even his one...the still centre in a turning world. Wasn't that what TS Eliot wrote? Your poetry reminds me of his, and for me, he is it.
ReplyDeleteOh flip. Why can't I edit thee comments? That was meant to be 'poignant'...no pigs intended :)
ReplyDeleteGosh, Val, to be compared to TS is flattery indeed! Thank you so much! It's so gratifying and encouraging to have such wonderful feedback to my poetry and especially from someone whose opinion I respect so much. Thanks again! XXX
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